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Post by ~One Of Three~ on Nov 26, 2004 1:48:42 GMT -5
This poem is kinda explicit but I had to share this one. I wrote this last year when my boyfriend was working out of town...but I know y'all are gonna relate: I lay in bed and close my eyes, there I see you. Your aura floats around me and comforts my soul As I embrace my pillow that wears a shirt that holds the scent of you. Your pheromones heighten my senses and it’s hard to keep control. My hands begin to mimic your touch, your gentleness as they roam From my neck to my breasts around my nipples to my belly… Then to your treasure below.
Slow strokes begin my journey to heaven I feel almost guilty as I float there solitarily Whispering your name as I delve even deeper Trembling in pleasure, sweating from sexual fever I come down from my journey satisfied but not completely My breathing slows…I open my eyes Then I sigh, look at the sky and drift into slumber. Reminiscing on my trip to heaven alone. I long for your tender touch and crave your kiss I can’t wait until you’re home So I can again float with my angel into bliss
I miss you.
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beezyboi
Feeling At Home
....HOLLA ATCHA BOI!
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Post by beezyboi on Nov 26, 2004 15:09:49 GMT -5
yep explicit,but good...i love ya word play from the title to the individual words within your poem! good poem girl!
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Nov 26, 2004 21:57:39 GMT -5
GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I may have to use it one day, none of mine seem to be as good as the ones that I am reading today. Means I'mma have to step up my game!! LOL J/K
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Nov 26, 2004 22:00:41 GMT -5
I am so feelin' this!!!
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