beezyboi
Feeling At Home
....HOLLA ATCHA BOI!
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Post by beezyboi on Nov 26, 2004 0:41:25 GMT -5
to think I cherished 3 long years with ya almost conceived a seed with ya almost laid the ring on ya never blamed a thing on ya and for you to be so childlike and act the way that you do to say the things that you do... my questions have no answers, no clue I played the fool until I identified the real fool was you no longer cool with you stepped on my feelings like shoes my feelings were dispensable like glad trash bags I was sad for so long but still I’m glad I had the chance- to identify the real snake in the grass the half- emptiness of your glass could not suffice my thirst what's worse I’ve given my heart but you- you put it in a hearse for all to mourn like a funeral in church how could you put me through this hurt I once laced you with diamond rings but sad songs I sing I once was hot with passion but now I’m cooler than ice that sublimes my tears, like the days of Noah, flooded my heart- for days and I felt my days cold like winter in may so I pray for the power to release you from memory to erase the pain you've given me and to go on with what life has given me what you were was fake so superficially artificial you're the phantom pains in my legs or the blood clots in my veins it pours when it rains but now I long for better days for someone who wont complain wont take my loving all in vain! all I’m saying the superficially artificial ways you've displayed in some ways will make me a better person, and for my next love... a better man!!
You are so superficially artificial (A.K.A.=Phony)
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Nov 26, 2004 21:52:40 GMT -5
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!! Umm..... was that something that you experienced first hand, or were you relating to someone else's misfortune?
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Nov 26, 2004 22:05:44 GMT -5
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Post by ~One Of Three~ on Nov 26, 2004 22:09:13 GMT -5
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beezyboi
Feeling At Home
....HOLLA ATCHA BOI!
Posts: 48
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Post by beezyboi on Nov 27, 2004 5:02:27 GMT -5
very personal yet slightly exaggerated to give it a lil drama-u kno?
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Nov 27, 2004 6:01:17 GMT -5
very deep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I LIKES!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D
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Post by AngelicVoices19 on Dec 1, 2004 20:16:16 GMT -5
I think that's all I have to say to that.
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beezyboi
Feeling At Home
....HOLLA ATCHA BOI!
Posts: 48
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Post by beezyboi on Dec 2, 2004 16:17:05 GMT -5
thanks you all for your feedback,but this is life... i know we all can relate to this someway or another/oneday or another!
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