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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Aug 17, 2004 15:18:43 GMT -5
I need a title y'all
I been going through some things, cried so many nights but no matter what the outcome you always been by my side to guide me through the pain, provide sunshine through the rain. The hurt it never left me, no matter how hard I tried to fight it, It made me weak inside, sometimes I wished that I had died, but then you came in my life and now its time I showed you how I felt inside.
I had been going through some things, very painful in my life there were times I thought I'd never see another sunshine, but you walked into my life taught me how to hold my head high and now I know that you an angel God sent to stay by my side.
The hurt it never left me, no matter how hard I tried to fight it, It made me weak inside, sometimes I wished that I had died, but then you came in my life and now its time I showed you how I felt inside.
Then this angelic voice spoke to me touched my spirit and set me free,showed me how to be carefree, showed it by trusting in me. Now looking back on those dark days past, lonely nights I never thought I'd make past. I hear your voice and I see your smile, your light, your warmth, your inner child insulating me and all the while creating this feeling that will never......can never be erased, how you, my angel saved me from that dark place.
Written by:
Latoya Ivey
AKA
Peaches
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Aug 17, 2004 16:55:09 GMT -5
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Post by NinaSky on Aug 19, 2004 3:45:00 GMT -5
OH LORD PEACHES THAT WAS POWERFUL! :'(I AIN'T GONNA LIE MY EYES GOT WATERY LIKE SOMEBODY WAS TELLING ME THAT. WOW A POEMS NEVER MAKE MY EYES WATER LIKE THAT, DAMN PEACHES U HAVE A WONDERFUL GIFT. AND THAT'S TRULY TRUE, STRAIGHT UP HONEST. I HAVE TO THINK OF A TITLE THOUGH, I HAVE TO LET IT MAINATE IN MY HEAD FOR A WHILE.LOL.BUT I'LL LET U KNOW. I'M SO OVERWHELMED, I NEED TO CALM DOWN.LOL
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Aug 22, 2004 1:14:17 GMT -5
Thank you Nina!!!!!11
That means a lot, really it does!!!!!
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Post by NinaSky on Aug 24, 2004 0:23:55 GMT -5
YOUR WELCOME PEACH! IF U READ THAT TO SOMEONE, YOU WOULD MAKE THEM CRY FROM TEARS OF JOY. HONESTLY!
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beezyboi
Feeling At Home
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Post by beezyboi on Nov 30, 2004 14:00:34 GMT -5
THAT WAS NICE AND HEARTFELT, WHAT WAS THAT EXACTLY LIKE A SONG? COULD PROLLY TURN IT INTO ONE U KNO!
IF I HAD TO PICK A TITLE I WOULD NAME IT....................
"I FOUND MY SMILE/GRATITUDE"
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Nov 30, 2004 14:53:34 GMT -5
^^^^^^ I like that, but I know nothing of song writing I'm trying to learn though
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Post by ~One Of Three~ on Dec 1, 2004 23:17:55 GMT -5
It has song quality because it repeats a line or two. It would be a beautiful song if the right track and melody were put to it.
I agree with the title "Thank You".
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