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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Nov 19, 2003 23:48:54 GMT -5
Here's a poem that I wrote let me knowyour honest opinions: It Used To Be It used to be when I saw you, my stomach would get butterflies, my heart it would turn flips and beat outta my chest into my sides. It used to be that when I saw you my eyes shined, my smile got bigger and my stride got bolder by the minute. It used to be that when I saw you look in my direction my heart and soul seemed to pleading for your affection but instead of recieving it, you thought that you could give me that sly smile, your sexiest grin,and that I'd be dumb enough to spread my legs and let you in. It used to be, and back in the day tha might have been true, but come on its 2003 and I know I'm worth waitng for.
Do U think so too?.................Well if not then N@#a F&*K U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ©
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Nov 19, 2003 23:51:00 GMT -5
::Snappin' fingas in applause:: Tell it girl, tell it!
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Post by NinaSky on Dec 13, 2003 17:56:08 GMT -5
I can relate to this gurl!dang,you hit it hard!lol.I like it though!
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Post by *~*Lady K*~*~ on Dec 19, 2003 13:43:24 GMT -5
whooooooa snaps mah fingers! That was so deep peaches. Good job. Man I wish ya'll could read ya'll's poems at the coffeehouses we have at school each month. Good job goes out to all of u.
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Dec 20, 2003 4:10:56 GMT -5
Well if you want you cna read it!! I don't mind Kiesha ;D
LOL
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Post by Tanee78 on Dec 22, 2003 11:59:57 GMT -5
Tell It!!!!!!!!!!How it all changes in a little time!!!!
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elijah
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Post by elijah on Jan 21, 2004 11:53:35 GMT -5
lol that poem was funny at the end but good poem!! u tellin it huh....lol anyway holla!
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