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Post by NinaSky on Feb 26, 2006 23:10:32 GMT -5
i know this is not the perfect thing to do for me. but i'm hurting so bad, i need to tell somebody holding it in hurts and i better let go before it gets worst
THE ROSE WITH A THORN *This Rose born with such a tough life *Trying to live in a world she can't survive. *So empty & hurt It doesn't grow from it's seed. *Everytime it try it gets spunces & losess it's green *For no reason at all, it goes through terrible weather *Trying to hold her own for she can be better *No one understands her Just looks at her with disguss *Cuz her petals are not red, they are rotting in rust. *Her steam is so bented That she doesn't pick up her head. *Why should she When her soul feels so dead? *For every little thing the other roses make fun of her and put her down *It makes her think that she should of stayed underground *In this life full of dark, She is slowly dying & getting numb *She works so hard but she just can't find the sun *She needs love & a good shelter for she can get what she deserves *Not constant pain with mean people who keep hurting her. *One day she will rise & be the beautiful rose she was meant to be. *Then she'll stand out finally & be the rose that grew from concrete.
hope ya'll like it!!! the throne--her family and her surroundings which she can't change. the rose? ---ME!
I POSTED IT HERE CUZ MYBE YA'LL GO THROUGH WHAT I DO AND I CAN HELP YA'LL. AND I KNOW NOT A LOT OF YA'LL GO TO LADYS BOARD SO FOR THOSE WHO DON'T GO, HERE U GO!LOL
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Feb 27, 2006 0:05:26 GMT -5
Incredible!!! I know I've said this time and time again, but Nina, girl, you have truly been blessed with a God-given talent when it comes to expressin' yourself through poetry!
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Post by NinaSky on Mar 15, 2006 3:17:19 GMT -5
THANKS CC! SORRY I TOOK A WHILE TO POST A THANK YA. BEEN A LITTLE NOT MYSELF LATELY BUT OF COURSE I'LL BE FINE.LOL. THANKS CC! IT WAS VERY PERSONAL AND I'M GLAD U LIKE MY POEMS EVEN THOUGH THEY CAN BE A LITTLE TOO MUCH. THANKS C!
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