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Post by NinaSky on Aug 13, 2004 5:49:14 GMT -5
THIS IS A POEM I MADE OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD.IT WAS APOEM OF ENCOURAGEMENT SO I CAN FEEL BETTA. MY FRIEND MADE ME REALLY SAD AND I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. SO I WROTE A POEM TO HELP ME BE POSITIVE.HOPE YA'LL LIKE IT!!
^LIFE IS NOT A BEAUTIFUL PLACE IT'S LIKE A PILLOW OF STRUGGLE. ^IT'S NOT A QUICK PHASE IT'S LIKE YOUR GOALS YOU HAVE TO JUGGLE. ^IT MAY BE HARD &IT MAY BE FUN ^IT MAY BE DARK BUT THE SUN WILL COME ^WHATEVA YOU DO JUST TRY TO BE STRONG ^CUZ YOU MAY HAVE A SMILE ON YOUR FACE BUT IT WILL NOT LAST LONG. ^AS LONG AS YOU TRY YOU CAN MAKE IT WHERE YOU NEVER THOUGHT. ^YOU BELIEVE IN YOURSELF & NO ONE CAN TAKE WHAT YOU GOT. ^PEOPLE MAY HATE & THEY MAY PUT YOU DOWN. ^BUT NO MATTER WHAT THEY DO YOU PICK YOURSELF OFF THE GROUND. ^CUZ YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE YOUR OWN SUCCES. ^ BUT REMEMBER NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO, YOU DO YOUR BEST.
PRETTY WHACK BUT IT HELPED.LOL
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Post by *~*Lady K*~*~ on Aug 13, 2004 11:03:10 GMT -5
Stop That! Your poem was not whack. It was good. You never know, just those few uplifting words could brighten someone elses day.
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Aug 13, 2004 11:25:50 GMT -5
^^^ I agree 110%!
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Aug 13, 2004 11:42:48 GMT -5
That was wonderful NINA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so proud of you and your talent, keep up the GREAT work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks fo inspiring me and others!!!!
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Post by NinaSky on Aug 15, 2004 7:43:17 GMT -5
YOUR WELCOME PEACHES. THANK YA'LL FOR LIKEING THE POEM,I SHOULD BE READING THAT OVA AND OVA AGIN RIGHT NOW.LOL
SORRY I TOOK AWHILE BUT I WAS AT THE HOSIPAL TODAY,I HAVE ASISE. I GUESS IT'S FROM STRESS OR SOMETHING BUT I HAD TO DO AND THEY HAD TO OPEN IT AND ALL THIS NASTY STUFF.IT FELT LIKE 4000 NIDDLES KEEP POOKIN' YOU AND IT HURT LIKE A MUTHA.
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Aug 15, 2004 15:33:03 GMT -5
^^^ Awww, feel betta soon.
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Aug 15, 2004 17:31:15 GMT -5
YEAH FEEL BETTA BOO-BOO!!!!!!!!!11
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Post by NinaSky on Aug 16, 2004 3:14:34 GMT -5
THANKS YA'LL!I'LL BE OKAY,FOR THE NEXT 10 DAYS. WELL THAT WHAT THE MED SAY. :(LOL. I'LL BE FINE THOUGH,THANKS FOR THE SAPPORT YO. I APPRIATE IT VERY MUCH!
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beezyboi
Feeling At Home
....HOLLA ATCHA BOI!
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Post by beezyboi on Nov 30, 2004 14:03:42 GMT -5
SORRY TO HEAR YA WERE SO SAD YA HAD TO WRITE A POEM TO TRY TO MAKE YA FEEL BETTER,KINDA LAME WHEN U THINK U HAVE FRIENDS HUH?
BUT IT WAS SWEET,INNOCENT,AND CORRECT-FILLED WITH THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF REALISM AND A LIL ADDED PESSIMISM
KEEP YA HEAD UP....THO IT WAS PROLLY A LONG TIME AGO......
HOLLA!!!
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Post by NinaSky on Aug 29, 2006 23:49:14 GMT -5
im sorry this is way late.lol but i just saw it right now!! thanks man i really apprecite it!! im glad u liked it so much!!
sorry but it would be so wrong if i didnt say thanks man! so i really apprecite it!!
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