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Post by ImmortalDragon23 on Mar 23, 2004 22:37:49 GMT -5
Speak: Im sorry for not having the courge to talk to you face to face > But i have a little something on my mind > Listen Verse One: Questioning > Im talking about you and me > wondering if its gona be forever > But knowing that we might not stay together > makes me think why should i bother Hook: It makes me feel a little hopeless knowing you will be gone one day > My head is telling me i love you but my heart is telling me i should let you go > What should i say what should i do what > i gotta make up my mind and i gotta make it up soon > Chorus: Sometimes in my heart i have Love Regrets > I gotta know, we gotta know > Could This be the real thing or just a phase > Part our ways or eternity > Im sorry for all the wrong that ive done to you baby > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Thats all i feel like writting but i still gotta
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Post by NinaSky on Mar 24, 2004 2:09:58 GMT -5
GO MIGUEL,GO MIGUEL!!!!LOL .THAT;S MY BOI RIGHT THERE,HE WROTE THAT.YEAH YEAH!LOL.THAT WAS TIGHT MAN,KEEP DOING IT MAN.WHENEVER YOU FEEL LIKE WRITING SOME MORE,WRITE ON MAN!LOL.CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR SOME MORE.
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Mar 24, 2004 22:35:37 GMT -5
You are very talented! I love what you have written so far.
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Mar 26, 2004 11:11:44 GMT -5
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I"M TOO JEALOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! J/K
That was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! you are very talented, now if I could only write songs then i would be good to go. You got any tips?
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Post by *~*Lady K*~*~ on Mar 26, 2004 13:46:36 GMT -5
That was very nice!
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Post by Tanee78 on Mar 26, 2004 21:32:27 GMT -5
That was good! I was trying to feel the beat as I read!!! lol
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Post by ImmortalDragon23 on Mar 28, 2004 23:32:55 GMT -5
thanks im gona post another poem i juss wrote its not really a song song but itz just poetry... hope yall like it
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Post by ImmortalDragon23 on Mar 28, 2004 23:59:11 GMT -5
also my advice is try to stay away from basic words like i love you make ur song sound differnet in differnt then anything ever wrote thats what i am gona try doin writtin more how i feel that make u a better writter. also maybe listin to music while u write with out words thats always goodbut songs like 5 steps make u really relase ur feelingz so instead of i love u girl or dont leave me talk bout death an life something more caputring if that help
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