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Post by NinaSky on Mar 3, 2004 6:50:53 GMT -5
WHATZ UP YA,HAVEN'T BEEN OUT FOR A LONG TIME!!LOL.IT'S OKAY,YA FORGIVE ME!LOL.HERE'S A POEM FOR YA,HOPE YA'LL LIKE IT!
My feelings · Do you care how I feel? Or do you laugh when I’m hurt? · It seems like you don’t care Cuz you just kick me to the curb. · Why do you make me cry? Why do you like to push me down? · Is it funny to you? Or you just like me to be on the grown? · Well I want to let you know, Let you know that this ain’t a joke. · It leaves me crying And my heart is broke. · You wouldn’t like it if people hurt you the way you do to me man. At first I loved you but know I don’t see how I can. · I already go through so much I don’t need your screamin’ and teasing. · Next time you should care about my fuckin’ feeling
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Post by Sweet Meat aka CC on Mar 3, 2004 12:37:06 GMT -5
Keep up the good work! I feel ya on this one fo' real!
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Post by JUCIEE GUDNESS FROM DA HOOD on Mar 3, 2004 23:12:58 GMT -5
That was wonderful Nina, I love this poem and I hope to hear more from you. ;D
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Post by NinaSky on Mar 4, 2004 13:18:31 GMT -5
OH PEACH YOU WILL DEFINALLY!THANK YA FOR ALWAYS SAPPORTING ME IN MY POEMS AND STORYS!YA ARE THE 0NLY 2 THAT DO AND I REALLY APPREIATE IT FROM MY HEART.THANK YA,I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE THE ENDING BUT IT'S OKAY,AS LONG AS YA LIKE IT.YA TWO ARE THE ONES WHO MOTAVATE ME TO WRITE MORE AND MORE. THANKS YA NINA
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